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Convert this passage into Standard English

Post by Admin on Thu Oct 08, 2015 12:54 pm

One day i went to the market then i saw the fish, damn big sial! I immediately bought it and cook fish soup cause my mother like to drink that one. Wah! It was damn Shiok!

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Re: Convert this passage into Standard English

Post by Dominic Lee on Thu Oct 08, 2015 4:32 pm

One day, i went to the market where i saw a fish that was really big. I immediately bought it to cook my mother's favourite dish,fish soup. It was really good!

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Re: Convert this passage into Standard English

Post by Jude Lee Wen Jie on Thu Oct 08, 2015 6:21 pm

Good point Dominic! However, i think it could be better if you wrote it as

One day, i went to the market where i saw a fish that was really big. I bought it immediately to cook fish soup which is my mother's favourite. It tasted really good!

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